Tuesday, January 25, 2011

BLACKOUT by DORK


 I used to write a short stories almost every month last year,
to increase my writing in English. So here is it, BLACKOUT :

“You can buy these cheap cosmetics at any store......," the TV sounds.
She’s still watching and hoping that she can watch the story about cosmetics until the end. But....................

"Boosh," sounds one of the light at the living room, something seems to be smashed.
"Sis, what’s happening here,” said Alice, my younger sister.
"Nothing, it’s just a blackout. Lighting and thunderstorm," I replied
"Oh, great, now I can't sleep," Alice say with a sigh.

But still, it’s really dark, 
I don't think at that time it couldn’t be 6.00 o'clock but it is.
Dark, like it's already midnight.
It’s spooky but I've got to be brave for this, because there's only me and my younger sister.

"Damn, it's hot here," Alice complained.
"Haiya, can’t you stop complaining, it only going to be for a while only," I replied
But, there's a loud noise which followed with a flash of lightning.
"Now, I'm afraid," says Alice, scared.
"Relax, I'm here, let's get some matches and light those candles,” says me.

While Alice put on some lights, I was still searching for the torchlight,
but then my phone rang, i didn't take it because of the lightning,
I don't want to be a victim, it was just a  precaution.
Stay away from the cell phone,
but  Alice  and me was still in danger  because my house was full of electronic equipments.
Everything, PS2, PS3, X-BOX and my lovely equipment, my home studio with all the keyboards.

"Hah.., I can't let all of them ruined, It took 2 years to buy the complete equipment," sigh me.
"Sis, already done! I’ve already lit 10 candles," Alice said
I was so shocked, because of the 10 candles. You know how dangerous it will be,
"10 candles? You’ve got to be kidding? ," I shouted while I took a step to go to the living room.
Then, my face went   really red... "GOTCHA!, am I  an idiot to put on the lights of 10 candles?," Alice pranked me.

She laughed loudly... but laughing just for a while.
Then she said” Do you hear that voice?," asked Alice
"OK, now you going to play PRANK again yeah?," says me loudly.
"No, I'm not lying, come follow me," Alice said.

Step by step I followed Alice, I felt very cold.
"HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP!," Alice started screaming.
I ran, and I was so scared because i thought i was behind her.
"WHERE ARE YOU?," ask me shouting,  so Alice can hear me.
But seriously no sound, 
from this moment on, I freaked.
The lighting was still coming, luckily i kept my cell phone and pen knife in my pocket

I searched for Alice from one room to another 
"where are you Alice!," I shouted, nervous.
"BOOM!," I heard a sniper shot.
I look down, but there's was no one to be seen.
I opened my eyes widely, it's not a sniper shot but lighting

I still had time for a joke "How stupid I am," says me.
I kept searching, I almost gave up, but not about my younger sister,
I want her now, she is  the only one that I've got right now,
Yes , I've a family but our mom and dad always fly,  for business
We always stick together.
Then I opened the door slowly "AHHHHHHHH! ," I screamed.

I saw Alice body and head laying down,
the legs, hand and others parts of the body, gone!
I'm freaking out right now, 
bravely I started to run and get out from the house.

"Oh my god!," I'm shivering  and the cell phone that in my pocket vibrated.
I ran, with a thunderstorm and lightning still heavy
I've no idea what I'm going to do,

I tried calling, but the phone answered
"Your service is not available," 

then I heard a sound of a car,
"Vroom, vroom, vroom, vroom," the car warming up.
It’s like the car getting ready to hit me.
I look at the back, but no car was there,
I closed my ears, eyes and shouted "LEAVE ME ALONE!"
When I opened  my eyes,  i felt somebody stabbing me,
I touched my body between my hips and my navel

I felt blood starting to flow profusely
I looked at the back but there was only one person that i know,
ALICE!
She laughed in front of me with a crazy look on her face.
SHE IS ALICE, NO DOUBT.
"How could you," says me while pressing the blood from flowing.
"Yes, I could," say Alice.
"But why?," ask me.
"Ask mom and dad, although they always go there and there for business but 
they still want to talk to you rather than me," said Alice.
"But......," before I could finish my words I fainted.

1 DAY LATER
I open my eyes and
I'm in a bed full of hospital equipment,
I do not know it was a dream or reality,
"Hey sister," Alice smiling still hold the knife full of blood.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..."

Till then :) XXDORKXX
2011 DORK DIARY COPYRIGHT.

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